My hometown is a small village. It's not only big but also beautiful(想表达不是非常大但是很美丽可以用not only... buy also....代替这样使句子更准确无误).If you follow me to go there,you will see a big tree in my hometown(在写英文作文时不可以用祈使句除非是过去某人叫某人做了的事情).There is a beautiful sea in it and I like swimming in the sea.People in my hometown are friendly to me and they also live happily.I love my hometown. So taht`s all, how about your hometown?
接下来的我不必说明了,你看了就知道了。(记住,在写英语作文时该缩减的时候要缩减,该增加的一定得增加。避免不必要的语法错误还有平时上课一定要好好做好笔记,上课多多听讲)